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For the lack of windmills

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I rise against the frantic gusts of wind,
to defy the storm for defiance sake,
as though by will I can the storm rescind,
but I am but a man who dreams, awake.

Defiant still I turn my righteous fury,
towards a foe that I can surely beat,
but the tide's upon me in a hurry,
and for caution's sake, I again retreat.

Come at last to this, my final hour,
I make my stand so I might proven be,
that a man may conquer nature's power,
and standing tall, withstand a falling tree.

Though my cause was worthy, my flesh was not,
and henceforth I remain restrained by cot.
Prompt: "Descent into Madness"

You ever get writer's block? Me too. I set myself a goal to write one poem for each of the Poetry Screams prompts and, being myself, have been attempting to do at least one a day. Three days in, I hit a wall and could not for the life of me come up with one good idea. I half-wrote at least half a dozen poems without one iota of spark or flare and I swear it felt like I was pulling teeth. So what did I do? I decided to free write something else, just to stop trying to force it. And this came out, fully formed, without the slightest thought or planning. And it fits a prompt. So screw you writer's block.

The title is a nod to Don Quixote, as is the poem.

Submitted to the #Open-Mic-Poetry Sonnet Contest.
Submitted to #Live-Love-Write Gladiator Prompt.



The The Fourth Annual Poetry Screams Prompt Contest had a list of 10 prompts and I challenged myself to write a poem for each one. The following were the result.

The Lonely Prince (Graveside Serenade)
Midnight Musings (In the Glow of Candlelit Eyes)
Grey is a beautiful color (Smile like a Scythe)
Of russet red apples (Autumn's Kiss)
Dreams are a gateway (Shapes in the Void)
For the lack of windmills (Descent into Madness)
Ghoulish Delight (Nightdance and Shadowplay)
Lost Innocence (Haunted Star)
Mark my Words (Debt of Bones)
Acceptance (The Dying Season)

Sonnet.
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timeraider's avatar
"but I am but a man who dreams" is a wonderful phrase. I really enjoyed the way you used repetition and internal rhymes, accentuating the standard end-rhyme scheme. I was a touch disappointed by the punchline (not noticing the "Humor" category before I began reading), if only because the first two stanzas set up so well. Reading the comments, I see what you were going for - and I do think you strike the desired tone. Well done all around.